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Today i have received feedback from both my peers in lesson and my teacher who have identified what they would change, add or delete from my magazine pieces in order to improve them.

Front cover:

• Increase the size of the barcode
• include a URL link to my magazine's website
• Re-think about the real life artists i am including - are they realistic for an NME style magazine?
• include at least one more cover line to fill the 'negative space'
• decrease the gaps between the text accompanying the cover lines
• change the font of the pug
• ensure that there is a realistic dateline an price

Contents page:

• Decrease the size of the page numbers
• decrease the space around the images 
• decrease the space between the text accompanying themain features
• In the space created include more sub-headings and more magazine content for a more realistic contents page

Double page spread

• Decrease the size of the article text
• Increase the amount of article text
• Include an introduction to the interview to set the scene

I agree with all of this feedback and will dedicate a descent amount of time to making these improvements to achieve a higher grade.